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"I have no more words than to say thank you so much for helping on the first step to accomplish (sic) my dream." | |||
- M.T., applying to a university in the United States | |||
Sample MBA Paragraph
Please accept my application for admission into the MBA Human Resources Management Program at the University of Phoenix. I have enjoyed extensive work in both management and training programs in the field of human resources to date. However, as I now wish to move from my current middle management role into a far more comprehensive and challenging upper management position, I feel that advanced studies in human-resources management, such as those currently offered at the University of Phoenix, would both support and further my immediate career goals...
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How to Target the MBA Admission Committee: An effective admission statement for entry into an MBA program must be persuasive and well written. It must make reference to your future career goals, and wherever possible, those career goals should be linked specifically to the course of studies you hope to pursue in the graduate school of your choice. A good MBA admission essay also commonly includes some discussion of the applicant's personal interests and attributes, with perhaps reference to the applicant's demonstrated strength of character and commitment to task. Where your academic standings are not superior, and where you are doubtless competing with applicants sporting impressive academic achievements, only your admission statement can make the difference in your overall submission.
Only a winning and compelling admission essay can assure that your total submission package will stand out above the crowd. Contact us if you feel that you need assistance in creating that one unique and powerful statement most likely to gain the attention of rigorous admission personnel operating in the more reputable schools of today. | |
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